Blanket on the mountain top, snow,
Soothing sun reflected in the frozen lake below,
Sweat drips down to my cold shoulder,
Your warm embrace is one step closer,
Paint it all black,
and see my true colors in the darkness,
I hide in the shadows,
Of a never ending tunnel,
The depth of a setting,
The emotion of a color,
The relief of venting,
Words bring no closure...
I really like this. I like how you started going deep and talking about black, darkness, shadows etc. It brought a really haunting feeling to your poem. Good job.
ReplyDeletethis poem is very good, i can actually vision the setting , the color and also the mood of the poem.
ReplyDeletejust like steven jay said, this is a great, "i hide in the shadows,
ReplyDeleteOf a never ending tunnel"
You can almost be in the same place by reading this, GREAT JOB!!
Nice.
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